The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
- Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
The two pictures show contains of a fish pie and how manufacture of fish pie production work. Making a plate of fish pie which contains with fish, potato, peas, and sauce, at least need a month before it become ready to consume by consumers.
In manufacture, potatoes have to be delivered 12 hours up to one month before a fish pie ready to serve. They will be cleaned, sliced and boiled. After that potatoes will be chilled and stored before they combine with other gradients.
In other hand, fresh salmon have to be available in manufacture no more than 12 hours. In manufacture, the fresh salm...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remove'
Suggestion: remove
...e steamed and their skin and bones will removed. After that, the fresh fish will mix wi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'at least']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222826086957 0.268076937826 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.184782608696 0.116061578633 159% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923913043478 0.0759168565197 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0163043478261 0.0366838410393 44% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0217391304348 0.0131127313244 166% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108695652174 0.155750635184 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0815217391304 0.0379272487307 215% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.49649197558 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0434782608696 0.0210936926555 206% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0597826086957 0.0948980150116 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0380434782609 0.00437022459523 871% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0163043478261 0.00967000014798 169% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 929.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.9 82% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73456790123 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277777777778 0.337110787985 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.191358024691 0.247514529752 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154320987654 0.171178102325 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0864197530864 0.112407865282 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49649197558 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.546246751206 103% => OK
Word variations: 47.3777381703 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.2 23.0094962315 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7283238413 42.9750493124 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 135.714022679 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 23.0094962315 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 0.689975730869 29% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 35.3358024691 47.7609492067 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.85365853659 2.94281807926 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22179537091 0.418131533498 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.168909204407 0.181151798455 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0991046705195 0.0850326197045 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.632901408647 0.706616315825 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114082679772 0.157042692854 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109514469347 0.228904883108 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773524600023 0.108899403657 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274818149922 0.367819155151 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0742219546099 0.0812612215331 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155548948759 0.316326947829 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580138534535 0.0921553760075 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
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Rates: 70.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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