From the diagrams above, we can see how the generator of wave-energy machine operate. These generator contains of two chambers. The first chamber, the below ones, located under the sea. The wave from the sea, will fill the chamber. When the wave hit the wall, the wave make the air flow roll the turbine. As for the second chamber, is located above the sea water. The air flow enter the generator from above and roll the turbine, the above turbine ones.
For the installation location, we have two options. First option is deeper under the sea. These option need more money to install,it costly. Eventhough it costly, it have an advantage. The output of electricity is higher than the other option because the wave is bigger. The bigger the waves, means more energy to produce more electricity. As for second options, its located is closer to the beach. The wave here is smaller than the other which mean smaller energy to produce electricity. But it has an advantage too. These time,the advantage is about the cost.it’s cheaper than the option one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this generator' or 'These generators'?
Suggestion: This generator; These generators
...nerator of wave-energy machine operate. These generator contains of two chambers. The first cha...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... These option need more money to install,it costly. Eventhough it costly, it have a...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...all,it costly. Eventhough it costly, it have an advantage. The output of electricity...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... But it has an advantage too. These time,the advantage is about the cost.it's c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85635359116 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44310116918 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530386740331 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.0818669699 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.7058823529 112.824112599 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6470588235 22.9334400587 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.52941176471 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158768719376 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476872389689 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429976527762 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116140135845 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00762194873213 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.72 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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