The diagrams represents the structure and the location options of wave-energy machines which can produce energy from sea waves.
The machine is composed by two chambers: the lower contains water which increases with the introduction of other water thanks to the waves; the upper contains two turbine which turns and an electricity generator which convert the turns of the turbine in electricity. The blades are rotates thanks to air flow that comes from the increasing of water level and the passage of air from the above. The machine should be put in the direction of the wave flow to permit the correct entrance of the water.
Wave-energy creators can be located near the coast or in the middle of the sea. The difference is in the height of the machines, in the costs, in the dimention of waves which enters in the objects and the energy output. If the machines are constructed near the coast, the costs are lower, the waves are smaller and by consequence the energy output is lower than that produced if the turbine is located in the middle of the sea where the waves are larger, but the costs of construction are higher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'represent'.
Suggestion: represent
The diagrams represents the structure and the location options ...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'turbine' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'turbines'.
Suggestion: turbines
...ks to the waves; the upper contains two turbine which turns and an electricity generato...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he turns of the turbine in electricity. The blades are rotates thanks to air flow t...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and the passage of air from the above. The machine should be put in the direction ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7461928934 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51586222403 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472081218274 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7753041763 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.571428571 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187122752849 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103095899489 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727739514667 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154776637984 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778628971674 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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