The given pictorial chart illustrates the information about the changes in horses throughout the period of 40 million years.
To begin with, before 40 million years horses were looks like a dog and their claws were like human hands.Moreover after 10 million years they looks like a donkey with long but thik tail and than their clawses were changed as comparison to the older horses, at that time there clawses have only three fingers.
Furthermore, 15 million years ago horses were known as MERYCHIPPERS and these horses were looks like a modern horses.Despite,its clawses were similar to the 13 million years older horses but some hairs were grown om the neck.Even so, modern horses are totally different from the other old horses,it have a big hair hairs on neck and also Modern horses have a big and thick tail. Moreover,their clawses are totally different from the other old horses.
In crux it is to be said that Modern horses are totally different from the other old horses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...g and their claws were like human hands.Moreover after 10 million years they looks like ...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...g and their claws were like human hands.Moreover after 10 million years they looks like ...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
...ds.Moreover after 10 million years they looks like a donkey with long but thik tail a...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ke a donkey with long but thik tail and than their clawses were changed as comparis...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ong but thik tail and than their clawses were changed as comparison to the older ...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
... horses were looks like a modern horses.Despite,its clawses were similar to the 13 mill...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , its
... were looks like a modern horses.Despite,its clawses were similar to the 13 million ...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...s but some hairs were grown om the neck.Even so, modern horses are totally different...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ally different from the other old horses,it have a big hair hairs on neck and also ...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... different from the other old horses,it have a big hair hairs on neck and also Moder...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , their
...rses have a big and thick tail. Moreover,their clawses are totally different from the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, even so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93413173653 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61940288406 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550898203593 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.691619606 43.030603864 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.8 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154456587369 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950900967342 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784987862971 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115498824432 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697328364943 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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