The diagrams below show how glass containers , such as bottles , are produced and recycled.

The given representation reveals the information about glass production in mainly four steps and glass recycling in five steps . This is clear and coherent representation.

As it is clearly seen , in the process of glass production first step to mix different material like : sand,soda-ash , limestone and many more other chemicals.After that approximately 1500 degree Celsius temperature is used to melt glass furnace. Nextly molten glass blowing is given shape of different glass containers.

As far as trend is concerned in process of glass recycling; firstly different used glases are collected. Secondly they are sorted by different colours . Thirdly whole collection of used glass go under the process of Washing so that impurities are removed. nextly collection is crushed and melted and finally used glass are moulded into New products.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
... steps and glass recycling in five steps . This is clear and coherent representati...
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Suggestion: ,
...representation. As it is clearly seen , in the process of glass production firs...
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Suggestion: , soda-ash
...ep to mix different material like : sand,soda-ash , limestone and many more other chemica...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...limestone and many more other chemicals.After that approximately 1500 degree Celsius ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...limestone and many more other chemicals.After that approximately 1500 degree Celsius ...
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Suggestion: .
...dly they are sorted by different colours . Thirdly whole collection of used glass ...
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Suggestion: Nextly
...Washing so that impurities are removed. nextly collection is crushed and melted and fi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ection is crushed and melted and finally used glass are moulded into New products...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55813953488 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10950547219 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658914728682 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.0999168053 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111071898038 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502517332067 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347611848866 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800766150667 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134940302885 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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