The diagrams below show how glass containers, such as bottoes, are produced and recycled.

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The diagrams below show how glass containers, such as bottoes, are produced and recycled.

The first flow diagram depicts the information about how glass containers are produced while, the second diagram shows the recycling of used glass. It is clear and cohrent representation.

It can be seen that the first step in the glass production is mixing, in which materials like sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed together. After, the mixture is stored in the glass furnance at high temperature (1500℃) and this process is known as melting. Afterthat, shaping is the process in which molten glass is shaped by blowing. Finally, products are produced; namely glass containers.

The collection of used glass is the first step of recycling. Then, the collected glass is sorted by according to its colour. Further, for removing the impurities from the used glass, it has been washed. At the fourth stage of recycling, the glass is crushed and metled, and in the last process, it is moulded into new products.

Overall, it is evident that the production of glass contains four steps however, five steps are involved in the recycling of used glass

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, second, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04494382022 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63074957529 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5775209594 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226520983943 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849871304357 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841461851864 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147645924421 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883683502375 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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