The provided diagrams depict how floods can be prevented in the habitat territories with two distinct and different methods.
Overall , the main discrepancy between the diagrams is that they provide flood protection with and without a stopbank. In either case , the flood level is above the ground.
In the first diagram , the stopbank with the wide freeboard above , berm , and floodgate undersides staves off the river water to enter the ground and to level up the internal ponding . This is designed to protect houses from the harm that floods
contribute .
Meanwhile , protection without a stopbank , the buildings have completely relied on three higher stilts . This is measured the houses to be above 300 mm from ponding level . This measurement is called freeboard .
In both of the methods , the raised building is just above the 100-year flood level and covers the ground level , and internal runoff is not taken into account .
- The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding 56
- The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22666666667 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6184764144 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6224658398 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215986492035 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093140061092 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073658852683 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126755876159 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657940863762 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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