The diagrams below show the life cycle of frog.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the different stages of frog of its life cycle.
Overall, the development process of frog includes five stages, from mating to become an adult frog .
Initially, two adult frogs mating together and then, the female lays a large number of fertilized eggs in a fond. After this stage is completed, eggs developed tadpole. It looks like small fishes than mature frogs . Two tiny front legs break thought at the third stage with a long tail. At this time, it still live in the water.
By the period of time, the frog has enough four climbs and move to live in the land, breath by lung. Its tail is shorter more and more until it disappear. It continues grow up in size and become mature frog. The final stage has been completed and the cycle will then continue again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ges, from mating to become an adult frog . Initially, two adult frogs mating toge...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ting together and then, the female lays a large number of fertilized eggs in a fond. After this s...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ooks like small fishes than mature frogs . Two tiny front legs break thought at th...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lives'?
Suggestion: lives
...ith a long tail. At this time, it still live in the water. By the period of time, t...
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Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...me, it still live in the water. By the period of time, the frog has enough four climbs and mo...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: up
...e until it disappear. It continues grow up in size and become mature frog. The final stage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 648.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59574468085 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18022624369 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2585183897 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.9090909091 112.824112599 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8181818182 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106428609224 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406256376802 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438096094388 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081422293506 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452822071379 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.2329268293 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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