The first diagram gives information about the life cycle of silkworm. The second linear chart highlights the steps employed in producing silk cloth.
Overall, it is clearly evident that, there are four distinct cyclical stages of the silkworm, whereas to produce silk cloth entails three linear steps.
The life cycle if the silkworm begins with eggs laid on a leaf. After 10 days, the eggs are hatched into silkworm larva which feed on mulberry leaf. Following this, within a period of 4-6 weeks, silk thread is formed from larva, and then after roughly a week a cocoon is formed. After two weeks, moth is formed from the cocoon to initiate another cycle.
To produce silk cloth, the cocoons are carefully selected and boiled in water. They are then unwound into threads of about 300-900 meters long. The resultant threads are then twisted and woven and eventually dyed to attain silk cloth.
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. 78
- The pie charts and table give information about the total value sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. 78
- The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, whereas, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97350993377 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15355033486 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6188341535 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206771826591 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878830794204 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754285920709 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13467697573 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614542587188 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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