The diagrams illustrate the Saman's life cycle, which is being called as a giant fish.
As the diagrams outline, the salmon species life cycle starts from the spawning of eggs among tiny stones and ends with to become an adult salmon after prominent divisions are finished.
In detail of the salmon life cycle, initially, the salmon spawns eggs in between small rocks to become reeds, which are forwarded to superiorly flowing of the river, this whole process takes roughly 5 to 6 months. Subsequently, these reeds are grown and become fries, which are 3 to 8 cm in their entire size, which are passed down to inferior flowing of the river, which is the method, possesses around four years. By following, fries are expanded in their size and are being called as smolts, which are 12 to 15 centimetres in their size. Then, these smolts are travelled to open sea which is the whole process is taken by almost five years, where species get enough food to develop a large body, which is called adult salmon, in terms of its size is 72 to76 cm. Ultimately, if the salmon produces its family, again it needs to move the upper flowing river to rerelease eggs. This is the salmon's life cycle, which repeats continuously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rded to superiorly flowing of the river, this whole process takes roughly 5 to 6 ...
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Line 5, column 892, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
...ng river to rerelease eggs. This is the salmons life cycle, which repeats continuously....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71830985915 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33597209592 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0295212161 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.625 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162346006497 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827753813043 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574778574218 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141738075221 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306989795893 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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