The Map depicts information about the certain changes in School Over a span of 20 years From 2004 to 2024.
In 2004, School has capicity for 600 students which will increased by 400 students over the next 20 years after the reconstruction of School. The major change of the School is the building of School. School has a plan to develope the Third School building in front of the 1 School building in upcoming 20 years.The building 1 & 2 will be connected to each other in next two decade & short path that can easily accessible to building three.
In the northern eastern parth, the area coverd by sport field will bo moved to other place & became a smaller than before.it is just in close proximity to car parking which is located behind the School building three. Car parking 1&2 will be linked to the private road.
In conclude, the School site in 2024 will give a big chance to increased the strenght of students with excellent facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
... In 2004, school has capicity for 600 student which will incresed by 400 student over...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
... 600 student which will incresed by 400 student over the next 20 years after the recons...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: School
...f the school is the building of school. school have a plan to develope the Third schoo...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...chool is the building of school. school have a plan to develope the Third school bui...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he Third school building in front of the 1 school building In upcoming 20 years.T...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... 1 school building In upcoming 20 years.The building 1 & 2 will be connected to eac...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...ame a smaller than before.it is just in close proximity to car parking which is located behind ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67664670659 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45956223072 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6898690156 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234460110719 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126493862093 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784622755415 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143559464997 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662101587347 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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