Nowadays, every country has diffrent kind of rule regarding to ages of retirment. Many older people well performed into their age of 70 and 80. some country have a rule after the 50 person cannot continue his work but personally I think older people should be retired at 60.
To begin with, old people work indefinitely however it is not good policy. Age after 60 cannot be able to so many work at a single time. Many young employee have a good experience and skills compare to old person. They can either work in one area or diffrent area by using excellent ideas for the organization benefits. Having compulsory retirment allows new techniques and skill in an organization.
Furthermost, without any age limit, people can purely engaged with their work because they did not have any plans or roles. So result outcomes organizational growth dropped sharply. So their is drop in productivity and efficiency which would not beneficial to the organization.
After working over 30 years, at the age of 60, the old person should call it a day and hang up his boots for good. This is the age to savor and enjoy the spare time with familiy, children and grandchildren.many people take up hobbies like dance, cooking and travelling. Other do social work by sharing their knowledge and experience.
With many young people who are unemployeed and frustrated in low level position often call to retire the old people. I think this is correct because high unemployment rates are detrimental to a society growth.retiring people at age 60 will ensure there is change for better.
To conclude, 60 is the best retirment age for reason such as lack of ability and flexibility and it gives a job to young genration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, well, as for, i think, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82876712329 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82459309282 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7898593219 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9411764706 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224560459361 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716765124516 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535381454159 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123786463309 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615349700825 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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