The given diagrams show a comparison between 2 designs of houses in terms of different climatic conditions.
Overall, it can be clearly seen there are substantial differences in the planning of both the houses. The main differences between both designs are related mainly to the roofs, windows and insulation.
The house roof in cool climate is high angled, however, in cold weather, the house roof is made of reflective material. In addition, the entire wall of the house in cold climate is constructed from thermal building material surrounded by insulation, that keep house warm .On the other hand the insulation in warm weather is external insulation restricted to the roof of the house and extended in both direction to make roof overhangs for shade.
The other difference is the design of the windows, as there is only one window located in the higher side wall of the house in cool areas. The window face the direction of the sun to allow invasion of sun light into the house. However, the design for house in warm place has 2 windows in both sides which are closed and covered in day time and opened at night to
allow ventilation and remove the stored heat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nded by insulation, that keep house warm .On the other hand the insulation in warm...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...ed by insulation, that keep house warm .On the other hand the insulation in warm w...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
... of the house in cool areas. The window face the direction of the sun to allow invas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82673267327 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57473815009 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.387669264 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.875 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296057797922 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117141803022 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888368120557 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13742395605 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10410006955 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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