The two diagram depict the process of cement production and the second diagram illustrates how this cement is used to produce concrete production. both process have similarity and difference. They are similar because both of them has more than one input and has a single output. on the other hand the number of production steps cement production is more complicated process than concrete .also cement produce by heat and concrete produce by water.
In the cement production diagram, firstly, limestone and clay are gathered and passed the crusher .then the powder obtained from crusher move to mixer .next, material entered to rotating heater. after heating step this material passed throw Ginder to produce the cement .at the end cement becomes ready to be packed in bags at the end of the grind.
In the concrete production diagram, the process contains only one step to have concrete material some material are mixed. Cement, water, sand and gravel which is a general name for small stones are all mixed in a rotating concrete mixer the proportions of these materials are s 15%, 10%, 25% and 50% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03783783784 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50080483758 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562162162162 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1445571757 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236585388318 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108758517633 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938570001561 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156746643731 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683951926362 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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