The diagrams give information about the manufacturer of frozen fish pies.
The diagrammatic representation elucidates how fish pies are produced in factories with four main ingredients: salmon, potatoes, peas and sauce.
Overall, it can be manifested that the process of fish pie can be divided in two steps produced potatoes and how Salamon is made. notably, the fish pie process is more labor-intensive.
First of all the potatoes are delivered a month in advance and once they have reached the factory they are cleaned with a Jet spray to remove any impurities. on a cover Belt, the potatoes are passed ahead where they are peeled and chopped in adequate size following this, potatoes slices are boiled in a container before being allowed to cool off in wat and finally stored for their process.
Simultaneously, within twelve hours of being delivered to the factory the piece of fresh fish is cooked in steam in the oven after adding lemon juice and salt to it then skin and bones are removed before a visual inspection takes place. after this, peas and sauce which have been prepared in advance are added, and a layer of potatoes slices is mixed to top it off the pice are then wrapt and freezes and lastly, they are either dispute store for the delivery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Notably
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Suggestion: On
...h a Jet spray to remove any impurities. on a cover Belt, the potatoes are passed a...
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Suggestion: After
...before a visual inspection takes place. after this, peas and sauce which have been pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, then, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77184466019 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59327367206 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2070276232 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.428571429 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086988729669 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537095095924 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566333875204 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065635511444 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560322523954 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.