Distribution of Employments by Sector
This bar graph illustrates the percentage of workforce distributed in three different sectors among Japan, Brazil and India. Overall, it can be seen that the service sector has the most number of employees containing the highest average percentage.
As the graph shows, the majority of Japan and Brazil’s workforce are in the service sectors in which Japan has the largest number of workers with 60% and India has the least with only 28%. It is worth noting that the comparison of the workforce distribution of the countries in the service sector has a similar trend with the industrial sector. In contrast, India’s highest proportion of workers are in the agricultural sector, having the largest rate of 60% in that area while Japan consists a very few, being the least with only 5%. It is also interesting to point that the workers from Brazil has the same rate of 25% in the sector of agriculture and industry. Furthermore, only 10% of India’s workforce is part of the industrial sector.
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