The presented bar chart illustrates the changes of divorce rates in terms of percentage in two countries Finland and Sweden within a timespan of 5 years.
As is observed, the ratio in Finland saw a ceiling trend whereas this figure in Sweden had a downward tendency over the same period, and there was also an oscillation in both countries. Despite having a lower rate at the beginning, Finland surpassed Sweden at the end of the period.
The ratio of divorce in Sweden was nearly 45%, about 8% higher than Finland in 2011. The rate rocketed and reached the highest peak over the period in 2012 at almost 50%. Nevertheless, this figure witnessed a slight drop to 47% in 2013 then continued to decline stably to the end of the period, slumped to approximately 45% in 2014 and saw a freefall to around 37% in 2015.
On the contrary, divorce rates in Finland started with a less percentage in 2011 at about 38% and this was followed by a 5% deterioration to around 33% in 2012. After that, the ratio underwent a steady growth for the last part of the period. This figure surged noticeably to just under 40% in 2013, at which point it rose to around 41% in 2014 and remained static for the next year, finally outraced the rate of Sweden.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, nevertheless, so, then, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54708520179 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52668200233 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569506726457 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3603704754 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389331143042 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169057546163 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127683886507 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269565605363 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664323240186 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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