The presented diagram shows different steps of steel rods manufacturing for the furniture industry. As is observed, the process passes through eleven distinct stages, beginning with the raw material and ending up with the production’s inspection before it is used.
First of all, the raw material is prepared which includes iron ore, yellow ore, and carbon. Next, the raw material is transported to the melting slit and heated at a high temperature between 1300 and 1500 degrees celsius. Following this, the melted mass is sent to the smelting cabin to undergo refinement. The candescent metal is then put in the pouring machine and poured into ingots.
In the next stage, the ingots are connected to a cooling reservoir at a temperature range of 60-100” C. Strand's casting is produced after the metal goes through nozzles and is cooled down. The strands are put into rollers and become well-shaped. After that, the products undergo heat treatment in the heating machine. The rods have to experience surface checks with a measuring automaton.
The steel rods are then cut by the cutter to the standard size and get ID stamping. Finally, the productions need to undergo inspection before use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
...servoir at a temperature range of 60-100” C. Strands casting is produced after th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15816326531 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71947390452 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3986831931 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7692307692 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721094541519 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266021921323 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606323800876 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496121649069 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465316458285 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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