the enviroment is getting worse and worse . Can you give specific examples , reasons and solutions .
In these days and ages , our enviroment is a hot potato for discussion , it is getting worse and worse due to human .First of all , one of the most dangerous pollutions is the air pollution . Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles which also lead to another problem is global warming , may have a devasting on the planet in this world . As the human pollution increases ,them produce even a larger quantities of wastes that spoil not only the land but also contaminate the rivers and oceans . Secondly , I have come up with the solutions to all that problems . We need to reduce the air pollution first , the governments need to pass laws to emissions from factories , to illusion : Force companies to use renewable energy such as solar , wind or water energy . Encourage people to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad ; therefore , reduce emissions . In addition , you can also apply reduce ,recycle and reuse as the solution . To sum up , we should have to do something to keep our enviroment and our planet a place worth living .
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
- It is very important that children should study hard at school time spend studying on the Internet is time wasted Do agree or disagree
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school 61
- it is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 150 180 words
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6157867393 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2959625642 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 5.23603664747 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 1.69756097561 1414% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135433371716 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056303406638 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751187880009 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135433371716 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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