The environment problems facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To

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The environment problems facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

now days environment is a major problem facing by world. there is a various larg companies and goverment policies are here to maintain the environmnet bur some people thought that these companies and goverment policies are responsible for the hazard environment . in my opinion some of the policies nd companies doing work for enviorment and some are not. here i am going to discus about both prespectives.

in this era many of the chemical industries properly draind out chemicals in seprate places for prevention of water pollution. for example these compnies try that the chemical mix water should not mixed with clean water which the human bieng drink. moreover, goverment tried to stop air pollution.for example they orderd those companies which are responsible for air pollution to shift thier industries out side the city for reduce the air pollution. in addition to this goverment request to the people that they should panted trees in thier hometowns for prevent the pollution and make environment safe. for example if people palanted trees in their hometown and even in thier streets due to this it will be increase the number of oxygen in the air and reduce the number of carbon dioxide. so enviroment became safe.

on the contarary some of the industries and government policies are responsible for the environment damage. bricks industries which are in between the cities are responsible for the environment danger. for example bricks industry produces smoke in the city which are not goog for life. beside that goverment had not took the strict action about those companies because government obtain a heavy tax from those companies for exapmle if there is a company of dangerous chemical that mixed in plane water goverment do not stop it because company pay for it and already had permission from government about this act.

to recapitulate in this essay illustrates that some of the comapnies and goverment reduce the exten of environmnet damage and some are responsible for this.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 3.97073170732 604% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 965.302439024 174% => OK
No of words: 328.0 196.424390244 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11585365854 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71081341019 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47256097561 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 283.868780488 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.770093308 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 1.69756097561 1591% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240037007365 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088335114102 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458772433171 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145552019989 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337810310725 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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