Essay showing the process by which carbonated drinks are made (also called a diagram essay).
The given diagram details the step by step procedure showing how carbonated drinks are produced and packed before sending to a supermarket.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the entire process undergoes five stages starting with filtering raw water, to pass through the carbonation plant, mixing with different colors and flavors, followed by packaging of the resulted product and ends with the shipping procedure.
According to the given illustration, first of all, the raw water is passed into a filter plant, where it gets treated in the presence of chemicals and water softeners. Then the cleaned water is pumped out in a heating chamber connected to the electric heaters. From here, the heated water is moved through the cooling pipe so as to expose it with carbon dioxide gas.
In the further stages, the carbon treated water produced in the last stage is transferred to a mixing tank via an outlet pipe. Later, this water is exposed to three different inlets: coloring, syrup, and flavor. Once mixed thoroughly, the process enters the next stage of filtering and filling. At this stage, the carbon drinks are stored in a variety of bottles and cans. After that, in the end, the packaged drinks are transported to the supermarkets to be used by customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...water is moved through the cooling pipe so as to expose it with carbon dioxide gas. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08372093023 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61478923989 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1026881165 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115376611178 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479967783745 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470188279123 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791885484375 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522046434633 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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