The diagram compares the spending money on three fast food items Hamburger,Fish or chips and pizza by Income Groups from UK in 1990.
It can be observed that in Hihg Income category,the highest amount of money was spent on hamburger (on average 44 pence),whereas pizza was slightly more than fish or chips,there were nearly as many pences (roughly 18 by pizza) as the money was spent by fish or chips (roughly 16 pences).
According to the Average Income, the amount of money was spent by hamburger fell sharply,but fish or chips had25 pences,only modestly more than fish or chips in High income category.
Lastly,in Low income was the level in which hamburger reached its lowest point on average 14 pences.Overall, the graph suggests that more money was spent on hamburger than any other product.Furthermore,fish and chips made up a particularly large proportion in low income trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, lastly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04109589041 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16227766017 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5255853968 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.0 112.824112599 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12641403489 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109061471922 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117738739984 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109061471922 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117738739984 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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