expenditure on a movie-making process.

Essay topics:

expenditure on a movie-making process.

The pie chart portrays the allocation of different expenditures in the production of a movie.

Overall, it is witnessed that producing a film is not only a time-consuming process but involves enormous expenditures. To be more precise, the actors' salaries draw out the highest proportion whereas the funds spend on logistics constitute the lowest proportion.

Analysing each expense profoundly, the percentage of actors' salaries accounts for 36% which is the largest of all expenses. However, the percentage of equipment comprises less than half of the actors' salaries. Moving towards the other portion of expenditures, the percentage of marketing stands at one-fifth of the entire budget, while the percentage of the film crew add up to 12% which is half of the marketing.

Nevertheless, there are some other segments of expenses too that are drawn in a film-making process. The director's fee and the writer's fee, both combined accounts for 10% of the entire budget. Conversely, the percentage of logistics amount to 4% which is at the lowest of all outlays.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32941176471 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09304387541 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4306835008 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961670582 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418225966209 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655834442383 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639858835119 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421048996987 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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