The pie chart shows eight popular subject for boys in a school.
Overall, it can be seen that science and physical education are the two most popular subjects by the boys, while history is the least favourite subject for the boys
Physical education is the most popular subject for boys in that school, a one third of the total boys like this subject. The second favourite subject for boys in this school is science, accounted for 25%. More than a half of the boys in this school either like physical education or science. Following science, mathematics comes in a third position, 18% of the total boys love to study this subject.
Technology, English and geography not that popular among the boys in this school, with 10%,8% and 5% respectively. The figure for history and other subjects 2% each and these are the two subject which least popular among the boys in this school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...the least favourite subject for the boys Physical education is the most popular ...
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... Following science, mathematics comes in a third position, 18% of the total boys ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77124183007 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36382739475 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4970689795 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.573849418292 0.215688989381 266% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.338179481685 0.103423049105 327% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157221617287 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.391496750025 0.15604864568 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945896717672 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 8.06136585366 79% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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