The vertical bar chart shows the opinion of a thousand teenagers from five different countries regarding the suitable age for granting the certain rights and responsibilities to youngsters. Vertical axis illustrates the age and the horizontal one depicts the country.
As can be seen from the chart, U.S. citizens suppose that children must be responsible for the criminal act starting from 12 years old, which is the lowest age among the responsibilities and rights in another countries mentioned in the chart. Moreover, the highest age in the chart given belongs to Japan, where the voters assume that any women or men must reach at least the age of 22 in order to be married.
In addition, the acceptable age to have the right to vote is approximately the same in four countries (the USA, the UK, Mexico and Egypt), ranged from 16 to 18 years old, whereas Japanese would give the possibility to vote to the one who approached the age of 20.
In conclusion, according to the votes of Japanese people, the age for being responsible or having the right to do something in Japan should be higher comparing to another four countries from the bar chart.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, at least, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81149418297 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6042504077 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.0 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190901239426 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103971216915 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574017706297 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125044480424 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470319396333 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.