The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result form this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of the energy use and its resulting emissions of gases in an average household in Australia.
It is noticeable from the charts that families in this country used most of their energy for heating systems. Only a small proportion of the total energy use was for cooling, lighting and refrigeration. As a result, the gas emissions due to heating was the most significant, compared to a trivial percentage of the other three.
As for energy use, the rate for heating was the highest, recording 72% with 30% for water heating solely, while the figure for refrigeration was considerably lower, showing 7%. 4% of the total household energy use was for lighting, compared to sharply half of it for cooling. Meanwhile, electricity used for other appliances accounted for 15% of the total usage.
In terms of gas emissions, the proportion for heating was still the highest one in the chart, recording 47% collectively though heating’s statistics (water heating not included) was approximately one third of its above pattern. Gas emitted from refrigeration appliances doubled its statistics for energy use, recording 14% whereas the rates for cooling and lighting made up 3% and 8% respectively.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'still', 'third', 'whereas', 'while', 'as for', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.297413793103 0.268076937826 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.116379310345 0.116061578633 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0689655172414 0.0759168565197 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0474137931034 0.0366838410393 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0258620689655 0.0131127313244 197% => OK
Prepositions: 0.159482758621 0.155750635184 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0560344827586 0.0379272487307 148% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99398981294 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0129310344828 0.0210936926555 61% => OK
Particles: 0.00431034482759 0.00175180941692 246% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0948275862069 0.0948980150116 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00431034482759 0.00967000014798 45% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1239.0 1161.00487805 107% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.9 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.195 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385 0.337110787985 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.31 0.247514529752 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.22 0.171178102325 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.17 0.112407865282 151% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99398981294 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.546246751206 99% => OK
Word variations: 48.1585256062 49.3433353143 98% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2222222222 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0031548963 42.9750493124 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 135.714022679 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.689975730869 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 53.2222222222 47.7609492067 111% => OK
Elegance: 2.70454545455 2.94281807926 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36106436658 0.418131533498 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.158359195994 0.181151798455 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0600886264469 0.0850326197045 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.705111793253 0.706616315825 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132060073754 0.157042692854 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208666848588 0.228904883108 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751053234458 0.108899403657 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.46312112299 0.367819155151 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0621814815055 0.0812612215331 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295927638975 0.316326947829 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719118589077 0.0921553760075 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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