The first pie chart provides details about that how energy is utilised in an average Australian household and the second pie chart illustrates the Australian houses household Greenhouse gas emission .
Overall it is interesting to note that the maximum energy is used for heating whereas the energy which is used in order to cooling is the list in contrast in contrast the highest Greenhouse gas is emitted from water heating.
It is Apparent from the first chart that 42% energy is used for heating which is more than others and followed by 30% water heating. Moreover, the percentage of energy which is used in order to other appliances is less than a one fifth, whilst 7% energy is utilised for refrigeration the less energy is used for both cooling and heating which are 2% 4%.
Moving further, 32% Greenhouse gas is estimated from water heating whereas the second place of taken by other appliances. In addition, almost 14% gas is released through refrigeration. The percentage of greenhouse gas which is emitted from heating and lighting are 15% and 8% respectively. Cooling produces only 3% gas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...houses household Greenhouse gas emission . Overall it is interesting to note th...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'in contrast'.
Suggestion: in contrast
...is used in order to cooling is the list in contrast in contrast the highest Greenhouse gas is emitted f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, whereas, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00540540541 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71655978672 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0845063138 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447904292364 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182379655549 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121074167251 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275043408469 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999676962008 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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