It is generally acknowledged that history is the one of those subjects which are not most preferred by plenty of students, but just as every subject has its own importance, from this perspective some masses claim that history is also a significant subject for students, whereas others claim that Science and Technology subject should be the priority of every student in modern era as compared to History. So both viewpoints will be critiqued before reaching a relevant conclusion in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, decreasing the popularity of History subject is a matter of concern, while it tells us about the past ancidents which occurred in the previous centuries. According to a recent survey, there are only two percent students who show their interest in History subject and choose their career on the basis of it, however around thirty folds of this proportion prefer to choose those subjects which are related to science and technology. There are several reasons behind this issue and one of them is that the introduction of Technology has amazed to everyone regarding its inventions. Therefore, most of students are curious to know the basic of everything which are surrounding us.
On the other hand, nowadays majority of students are choosing Science and Technology subjects due to the enhancement of these as well as these kind of subjects are the part of initial education. For instance, everything depends on science and technology which made every task easier. Recently ISRO launched Chandrayaan 2 which was fully rely on technology, even it could not get success but left numerous major points which are the centre of curiosity, can be ressolved with the help of Science and Technology.
To conclude, although, Science and Technology related subjects are interesting, but we should not forget history which represents the various cultures, traditions, events, war of the past decades.
- IELTS Task 1 - Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 56
- The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 78
- The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.Summari 73
- IELTS Task 1 - Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 11
- The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... choose their career on the basis of it, however around thirty folds of this prop...
^^
Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...ne regarding its inventions. Therefore, most of students are curious to know the basic of everyt...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... to the enhancement of these as well as these kind of subjects are the part of initial edu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
... launched Chandrayaan 2 which was fully rely on technology, even it could not get su...
^^^^
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t success but left numerous major points which are the centre of curiosity, can b...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80368375609 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.9519439708 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.0 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178493486796 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698620594058 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506543186357 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112888265977 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352515981931 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.