The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart show the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are two charts; one represent how energy is utilized in the average home in Australia and the other illustrates greenhouse gases emitted from this use of electricity.
Overall, we can see that heating both the home and water make up the vast majority of power consumption, while the highest Greenhouse gas emission come from 'other device' and water heating.
For power utilisation, warming the home takes up nearly half of the total and heating water makes up nearly a third. The next significant category is 'other appliances' with 15% and air conditioning, cooling and lighting make up just over a tenth of a combined total.
In contrast, heating only produces 15% of the total greenhouse gases, while water heating remains at around a third. Another significant difference between two pie charts is 'other appliances' which causes over a quarter of emissions. The remaining three categories make up exactly a quarter of all greenhouse emission combined.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19871794872 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7812166419 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1419047478 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1486475354 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707270103808 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604261168197 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100448337182 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642628857305 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.