The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result form this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The statistics display average proportion of energy used by different household appliances and corresponding proportion of carbon dioxide gas emitted from the use of these appliances in Australia.
Overall, heating and water heating use the largest proportion of energy while the largest proportion of greenhouse gas come from the consumption of energy used for water heating and other appliances.
With regard to the heating, the energy used is 42%, the highest value, while the gas emitted is 15%, ranking third. Concerning the water heating, the energy used and the gas emitted are almost equal with 30% and 32%, both ranking second, respectively.
Moving to other purposes of using energy, a similar pattern could be observed, which the energy uses is nearly half the gas emission. The energy used for cooling, lighting and refrigration are 2%, 4% and 7%, respectively.
Finally, the energy used for other appliances is 15%, ranking third, and the corresponding gas emitted is 28%, ranking second.
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- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result form this energy use Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, third, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32704402516 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78340081947 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496855345912 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3661202583 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26044129021 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146646625377 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0176689821134 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163177839205 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257097320188 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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