The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The first pie chart illustrates the percentage of energy being used in each Australian household. The second pie graph demonstrates the greenhouse gas discharges caused by this energy consumption.
Overall, the percentage of energy used for heating is the highest, while water heating is the second highest group which consumes the energy. As can be seen, water heating is also the top reason for the greenhouse gas emissions in Australian households.
Firstly, the proportion of the energy consumption for heating is the highest with 42%. It is readily apparent that the water heating accounts for 30%, which is higher than a half of the consumption of energy of other appliances. Moreover, the energy expenditure of refrigerator, lighting, and cooling are 7%, 4%, and 2% respectively.
Secondly, the greatest percentage of greenhouse gas emissions released from water heating make up 32%. In addition, other appliances caused 28% of the greenhouse gas, which is double higher than the emissions released from refrigeration. The proportion of greenhouse gas being outpoured from heating, lighting, and cooling range from 3% to 15%.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46327683616 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01772139337 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519774011299 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6118241986 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322461067771 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135266633195 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751907442702 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205076961606 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983130913718 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.