The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,
The pie charts show how an Australian household uses energy for different purposes and the figure for the greenhouse gas emissions caused by this energy consumption.
Overall, most Australian families use energy for heating but the majority of the greenhouse gas emissions are from water heating. Otherwise, the energy used for cooling as well as the greenhouse gas emissions is not as much as other appliances.
To begin with, Australians use most of their energy for heating and water heating with 42% and 30%, respectively. And there is just 7 percent of total energy use for refrigeration, 4 percent for lighting and 2% for cooling. Furthermore, about 15% of energy is consumed for other appliances.
Next, three-fifths of greenhouse gas emissions result from energy used for water heating and other appliances, while just 15% and 14% of emissions are caused by using energy for heating and refrigeration. Otherwise, a small proportion of greenhouse gas emissions come from consuming energy for cooling and lighting.
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari 67
- The table below shows the percentage of the population who rode bicycles in one town by age group in 2012 Summarize the important information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, well, while, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35582822086 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99302261104 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496932515337 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.845044729 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322625667188 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18554668104 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107904057905 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264060638059 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105152979741 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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