The first pie chart explains the average energy usage in an Australian house and second pie chart gives information regarding greenhouse gas emissions from this activities.
Overall, large portions of the energy are used for heating the house and water. But, green house gas emited from water heating process and other electronic appliances usage contributes to major part.
To begin with the details of energy usage, About 42% of all the household energy is used for central heating and it forms the largest percentage. On the otherhand, water heating consumes only 30% of the total energy. Eventhough refrigeration utilise 7% of electricity, all other electronic gadgets use 15 % only. Energy used for cooling and lighting are negligible falling to 2% and 4% respectively.
Moving on to the descriptions of greenhouse gas emissions, most of it are released during the process of water heating(32%). Although central heating emit CO2, it will come just half(15%) compared to previous one. 14% of the gases are contributed by refrigeration and it is similiar to central heating. Likewise, greenhouse gases released from electronic appliances together (28%) is just double the refrigeration alone. The greenhouse gases from cooling and lighting are unaccountable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...regarding greenhouse gas emissions from this activities. Overall, large portions...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'appliances'' or 'appliance's'?
Suggestion: appliances'; appliance's
...er heating process and other electronic appliances usage contributes to major part. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, likewise, regarding, second, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45408163265 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97168129887 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.630866785 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0833333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267411428499 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885522083702 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971824043423 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173916501267 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117957262717 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.