The first pie chart represents the average energy usages of a Australian family while the second chart illustrates the percentage of emissions of greenhouse gas.As it demonstrated, heating and water heating consume the highest energy of 42% and 30% respectively.
Overall, the two main uses of energy are heating and water heating whereas cooling, lighting and refrigation are lower uses of energy than the others.
According to the charts, heating only produces 15% of the harmful gas, although it consume the highest energy(42%) of the total energy by a Australian house used.Water heating makes up 30% and it gives the more amount of the greenhouse gas(32%) than its energy usages.
The refrigerator uses only 7% of the total energy but pollutes the greenhouse in exactly double proportion.Meanwhile, the energy uses by other appliances(15%) emit the greenhouse gas at nearly one-third which is almost a quarter of the total greenhouse gas.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Huong Ng
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27333333333 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07336225583 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8924576525 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 197.75 112.824112599 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320310601541 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197239214033 0.103423049105 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529200648652 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197239214033 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529200648652 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.2329268293 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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