The two charts clearly give informations about the percentage of energy consumed by an average Australian household and greenhouse gas emissions caused by the use of energy respectively. The two primary uses of energy are heating and water heating which contribute prominent proportion of emission as aftermath product from the energy cosumption.
Heating process spends less than a half of energy, but releases 15 % of the total greenhouse emissions. The water heating process is in the second position, precisely behind the heating process, consuming to one-third of the energy. Meanwhile, it contributes the greatest hazardous emission by 32 %.
The refrigerator unexpetedly takes only 7 % of the energy but gives double proportion of pollution. Furthermore, the use of energy and emission of dangerous gas by other appliances also presents similar results as only consumes 15 % of the energy while producing almost a quarter of the total greenhouse gas emissions.
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. 61
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents an 61
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55405405405 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07024749289 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5234432221 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345245574226 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145962157172 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13763911218 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228347490913 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153901568352 0.0819641961636 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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