The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compa

The pie charts illustrate energy consumption by category in Australia and greenhouse gas result from those lists. Looking more closely, it can be clearly seen that most energy is used for making heat, while it is one of main factor of releasing greenhouse gas in Australia.

According to the first picture, heating accounts for 42 percent, making it the highest percentage from all. While, water heating consumes 30 percent of overall energy, combining together with heating 72% percent uses for making hotness. Refrigeration, cooling, lighting and other appliances are each less than just 10%, only other appliances are 15 percent.

The main factor of greenhouse gas emissions come from water heating at 32 percent while heating releases only 15 percent, almost one-third of its consumption. Other appliances also one of the greenhouse effect problem, it releases 28 percent which higher than its energy consumption percentage. Refrigeration, cooling and lighting are small factor for greenhouse effect only 14 percent, 8 percent and 3 percent respectively.

In conclusion, even heating and water heating are the highest energy consumption in Australia, they release greenhouse gas less than other factors whereas other appliances release greenhouse gas at almost twice times from their energy use.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...most twice times from their energy use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, so, third, whereas, while, in conclusion, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.555 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81598561786 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8694965035 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.444444444 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184751942766 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960673851184 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688006268708 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141576245631 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754968675033 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.