The flow chart shows how sweaters are manufactured in a garment factory in Bangladesh

Essay topics:

The flow-chart shows how sweaters are manufactured in a garment factory in Bangladesh.

The rendered process chart illustrates the process of production of sweaters in a factory of garments in Bangladesh. Overall, it is crystal clear that the sixteen steps' process is linear as well as time-consuming.

In detail, the required thread is gathered at first. Thereafter, the process of winding and distribution initiates and when this ends then sweater panels are knit which are checked through the internet. subsequently, qualified panels are linked and these linked panels are further inspected online. Then the linked panels are trimmed before light inspection and mending. If there is any flaw in the product then that is returned to the winding section.

Furthermore, holes are made for the attachment of the buttons. The manufactured sweater undergoes cleansing, labeling, and ironing followed by an inspection by the quality team of the factory. Before propelling the final product for shipment after folding and packing, it is finally checked.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss is linear as well as time-consuming. In detail, the required thread is gather...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Subsequently
...which are checked through the internet. subsequently, qualified panels are linked and these ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed before light inspection and mending. If there is any flaw in the product then t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47333333333 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90263481838 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6930305127 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134093718273 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472683681056 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970267866377 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958355832577 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786057169183 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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