The following graph and pie chart shows the sale of a company in the first and the second quarter of the year?
The given circular and histogram chart reveals the information about. the sales of a company by six products in the first and second quarter of the year. The data is calibrated in percentum. Which is clearly and coherently represented.
It can be seen that, the highest sales of clothes and food has equal 25% in the first quarter of the year. whereas, the lowest sales of toys has been 5% in the first three months of the year. Apart from all this, the other products sales of 20% in the first quarter that is second highest sale in othe products. Moreover, In the first quarter sales of computer, electrical, food has been 10,15 and 25% respectively.
As far as trend is concerned that, the highest sales of toys has 30% in the second quarter of the year. However, either computer or other products sales has equal with 10% sale. Furthermore, In the second quarter sales of food, electrical and clothes has 20, 5 and 10% respectively.
Overall, it is evident that the sales of computer has equal 10% in the both quarter of the year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l 25% in the first quarter of the year. whereas, the lowest sales of toys has been 5% i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, second, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61081081081 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50525233504 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443243243243 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5187003462 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0833333333 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395174933599 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164421348749 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121399202588 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260181744262 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518320240359 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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