The following graphs illustrate electronic gaming trends in South Korea in 2006. The first outlines gamer age groups and gender demographics. The second indicates game type preference. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar graph illustrates electronic gaming trends in south Korea in 2006. The first bar graph compares the age group and gender demographics. The second bar graph shows the types of games.
Overall, male gamers play more games than female gamers. It is interesting to note that the maximum percentage of gamers age between 20 to 29. Role-playing games are more popular than other types of games.
Around 10% of male gamers age less than 10 years female gamers almost half of the percentage compare to male gamers. It is seen from the graph that the percentage of gamers increases between 12 to 29 age. The percentage of male gamers increases almost double (just under 20) percentage compared to less than 12 years. Age between 20 to 29, shows a significant increase of male gamers with a high of 35%. On the other hand, the percentage of female gamers increase slightly with 10%. However, after 29 age number of gamers decreases rapidly. Only 10% of ale gamers and only 3% of female gamers age over 30.
A role-playing game more popular among gamers with just under 50%. 20% of gamers play-action games followed by strategy game with approximately 17%. The least percentage of gamers play simulation games with just over 10%.
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- The following graphs illustrate electronic gaming trends in South Korea in 2006 The first outlines gamer age groups and gender demographics The second indicates game type preference Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features an 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8820754717 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52722801751 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471698113208 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.144816753 43.030603864 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.6875 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.25 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 5.23603664747 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269300918418 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116932769525 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889999078513 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180000698047 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118511910272 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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