Given flowchart illustrates the regular process to anyone who is applying for driving licence.
from chart we can tell that ,it takes six main steps to get the licence with excluding failures.
Firstly, person had to visit the licence issuing centre, he/she should fill the application for further procedure. in Next step, the applicant had to get his/her eye tested which is main step of the whole process, if the person failed in this test ,will not be eligible to get license. On the other hand , people who succeeded this step had to pay the fee and should take the written test , whereas positive results leads to next step of the process while candidates with negative results can re-take written test(Can take only twice after first attempt) to pass the exam, those who failed in these re-taken exams had to pay the fee again for next attempt. The next step of the process is driving test and it is the final test in this process , candidates who are qualified in this step will be issued driving licence while candidates who are not , can pay the fee again and should repeat process until they passed in driving test.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Khshbhman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...steps to get the licence with excluding failures. Firstly, person had to visit ...
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... the application for further procedure. in Next step, the applicant had to get hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71573604061 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21807984997 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.074183263 43.030603864 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.833333333 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173220104094 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10430128507 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610788327633 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13549212354 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344020095748 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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