The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles

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The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles.

The line chart illustrates data about how much nitrogen oxide is released by various transport categories, namely, diesel car, petrol car, lorries and buses from 10kph to 130kph. Overall, the amount of nitrogen oxide given off by all type of vehicles in question almost remains the constant, except for lorries, falling significantly. Additionally, buses are the most polluting vehicle over the whole speed.
As can be seen from the graph, buses are the least environmentally friendly form of transport at 10kph, producing 40g/km, nearly six times as much as the corresponding figure for diesel car, emitting 7kph. Meanwhile, lorries are the second most polluting vehicle type, at 33kph, three times as much as the relevant figure for petrol car, at 11kph.
It is clear from the chart that the level of nitrogen oxide by all transport follows two main patterns at 90kph. Particularly, nitrogen oxide release by both buses and lorries reaches a low of 26 g/km and 17 g/km at the speed of 60kph and 90kph, respectively, before that of buses increases markedly to 34g/km at 90kph, up roughly 30%. Meanwhile, both petrol car and diesel car see a slight decrease in the amount of nitrogen oxide discharged to 5g/km and 9g/km, respectively, at 90kph.
From 90kph onwards, nitrogen oxide emissions by buses and lorries grow considerably to 42g/km and 24g/km, up rough 24% and 41%, respectively, while that of petrol car goes up slightly to 12g/km. Meanwhile, the corresponding figure for diesel car remains unchanged towards the end of the speed in question.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10588235294 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77070410371 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525490196078 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7335444605 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137178532921 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060533749844 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446276137662 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874641279599 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288164370505 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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