The given graphs shows the money spent on medical researches, and deaths caused by diseases in 1990 in Someland.
The first histogram illustrates the expenditure on medical researches and second horizontal craft reveals the number of deaths caused due to the 6th diseases mentioned in the layout, in Someland during the year 1990.
At the first glance, most of the amount in Medical Research was spent on AIDS and as a result the mortality rate also declined, whereas, researchers spent least amount of money on TB and the death rate was at peak level.
It is interesting to note is that, leprosy and tropical diseases took investment of nearly about 80 million for the completion of research and death rates also declined ( around 0.2 and 0.4 respectively). In addition to this, about 180 millions of money is consumed by the researches on AIDS, outcomes are also significant, only about 0.3 millions of people die out of AIDS.
Now turning to further description of both the layouts, diseases such as; diarrhoea and malaria are (almost 50 and 60 millions respectively) and the death rates were (around 0.5 and 0.4 millions of people respectively). Furthermore only 20 millions was funded on TB, hence, nearly about 1.7 million of people died due to TB.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f research and death rates also declined around 0.2 and 0.4 respectively. In addi...
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Suggestion: 180 million
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Suggestion: 3 million
...omes are also significant, only about 0.3 millions of people die out of AIDS. Now turning ...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, whereas, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.953125 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72784935606 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1285248405 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.5 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1666666667 5.23603664747 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176289180266 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874047949388 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760628183311 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117002102007 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741478813848 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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