The line graph illustrates how many people in America spent on mobile phones, domestic and worldwide landline services over the period of 9 years.
In general, what stands out from the line graph is that the number of cell phones and international fixed-line services rose, in contrast, there was a decline gradual in the amount of money that was expensed on the national fixed-line during the period shown.
At the beginning of the period, the proportion of national fixed-line made up 700$ and became the highest figure, while overseas landline services just took up nearly 300$ at the same time. Following that service, the cell phone was used lowest in 3 different services, with 200$. In the next 5 years, the figure for domestic landlines suddenly dropped to the same point as the number of international services at 500$.
During the next 4 years, a significant growth of more than 700 was witnessed in the figure of international fixed-line service in 2010, while there was a steady decline from 500 to 400$ in the number of national services. Likewise, domestic and overseas services enormously changed, Cell phones stayed uniform at 300$ over the last few years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$700'.
Suggestion: $700
...oportion of national fixed-line made up 700$ and became the highest figure, while ov...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$300'.
Suggestion: $300
...s landline services just took up nearly 300$ at the same time. Following that servic...
^^^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...ed lowest in 3 different services, with 200$. In the next 5 years, the figure for do...
^^^^
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$500'.
Suggestion: $500
...the number of international services at 500$. During the next 4 years, a significan...
^^^^
Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$400'.
Suggestion: $400
... there was a steady decline from 500 to 400$ in the number of national services. Lik...
^^^^
Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$300'.
Suggestion: $300
... changed, Cell phones stayed uniform at 300$ over the last few years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01020408163 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65327707128 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1347144247 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.285714286 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263999604994 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125070519631 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788549691952 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185756570563 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578577126825 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.