The given maps show condition of Felixstone in 1967 and in 2001.
The given two maps; the former map depicts Felixstone condition in 1965.However, latter one reveals what changes were occured at same place after 44 years.
A quick look at both the maps is quite enough to make it clear that the spectacular alteration were taken place in Felixstone within the period of 44 years(from 1967 to 2001).While, golf course, shops, high street and dunes were remained at similar spot during the development of Felixstone.
First of all, in 1967, golf course was located at northwast just left side of high street which was between the shops. The northeast of the Felixstone was covered with farmland. Dunes and fish market were appeared at opposite corners in west and east end respectively.In this year, hotel was situated above the sea that was flowing from wast to east and sepetated with marina and pier. Cafe was constructed in the heart of the felixstone.
In comparision with 1967, in 2001, golf course stood at similar position as in 1967. Shops on the left side of high street were also at constant location. On the other hand, right side shops were replaced with newly built apartments.The farmland was removed in order to introduce swimming pool, hotel and tennis courts. Dunes were at analogous spot. In contrary fish market was knocked down and Private beach was erected instead of it. Hotel was rebuilt with different design and expanded with car park. Marina and pier were destroyed to make public beach. Turbines were set up in sea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.932 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50410542909 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 72.462270267 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0714285714 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143119865685 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474199443733 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728953399461 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109687835875 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646713277945 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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