The given picture provides information on the way that paper and pulp are produced.
The given picture provides information on the way that paper and pulp are produced.
A prompt glance at the shown process reveals that making pulp and paper needs to suffer from six main stages, beginning with preparing raw materials and ending with putting paper on a specialized machine.
Initially, waste paper is collected from public paper banks or from businesses before being sorted by hand. In this second step, paper is graded and unsuitable stuffs will be removed. Afterwards, selected paper would be delivered to paper mills in order to be ready for more complicated stages.
The following phrase is cleaning. In this step, paper is pulped and removed of other impurities so as to be prepared for de-inking stage which is getting rid of inks and glues. In the ultimate phrase, paper will be put on paper making machine which is machine manufacture of usable paper to complete the whole progress.
- Given are one table and two pie charts. The table provides data of the sum of tourists to Ashdown museum while two charts demonstrate the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visits, during the same periods. 78
- The given map gives information on two potential positions (S1 and S2) of a supermarket that will be built in a town called Garlsdon. 73
- A horizontal city or a vertical city 82
- The line graph demonstrates how the percentage of British families that owned different number of cars oscillated between 1971 and 2007. 78
- Due to having a more comfortable working life, some people believe that workers should only follow an occupation. While I admit that this option can bring about many beneficial advantages, I would argue that a number of adverse consequences would be gener 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... pulped and removed of other impurities so as to be prepared for de-inking stage which i...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03947368421 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52563038948 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4045452411 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345714419839 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194855736705 0.103423049105 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.306305825325 0.0843802449381 363% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339929337621 0.15604864568 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.381175685162 0.0819641961636 465% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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