The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries

The table and graph shows the information in two different countries which is Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo about their worldwide water use and water consumption. In line graph shows there are three ways of uses, which are agriculture, industrial, and domestic uses during the period of 1900 to 2000.

Since 1900-2000 agriculture become most of the water use by the sector around 500 km3 in the beginning and more than 3000 km3 at the end of 2000. In addition, there is a unique condition appeared along 1900-1950, water in industrial use and domestic use no more than 400km3, but in 1960-2000 industrial use increase more slightly than domestic use.

Lastly, in table shows water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000. Beside the water consumption, the table also compare their population and irrigated land. Brazil has 176 million and 26,500 km2 irrigated land and their water consumption per person is 359 m3. In contrast to Brazil, Democratic Republic of Congo has 5.2 million population and 100 km2 irrigated land only need 8 m3 water consumption per person.

Votes
Average: 8.6 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ir population and irrigated land. Brazil has 176 million and 26,500 km2 irrigated...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... to Brazil, Democratic Republic of Congo has 5.2 million population and 100 km2 i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in contrast to']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.336734693878 0.268076937826 126% => OK
Verbs: 0.0714285714286 0.116061578633 62% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0759168565197 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0255102040816 0.0366838410393 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.015306122449 0.0131127313244 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147959183673 0.155750635184 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0102040816327 0.0379272487307 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.68036518816 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0102040816327 0.0210936926555 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0561224489796 0.0948980150116 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102040816327 0.00967000014798 106% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1090.0 1161.00487805 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.9 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08938547486 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307262569832 0.337110787985 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240223463687 0.247514529752 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201117318436 0.171178102325 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150837988827 0.112407865282 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68036518816 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.546246751206 99% => OK
Word variations: 46.4659219583 49.3433353143 94% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.375 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8807831827 42.9750493124 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 135.714022679 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 46.3973463687 47.7609492067 97% => OK
Elegance: 4.40909090909 2.94281807926 150% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509692669991 0.418131533498 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.256943940861 0.181151798455 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103988356691 0.0850326197045 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.687253837744 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0854157636302 0.157042692854 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.274623656287 0.228904883108 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171782633101 0.108899403657 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.283875027079 0.367819155151 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0779441604691 0.0812612215331 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365108531074 0.316326947829 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101883998219 0.0921553760075 111% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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