The graph and table depicted the normal yearly temperatures and normal number of hours of sunshine for year in three cities London , New York , Sydney.
Overall the temperatures in Sydney the lowest in July while in London and New York while in London and New York is the enormous .
In January, the temperature in New York and London is very low about 5 degrees ,but at the same time in Sydney there is a higher temperature and it is 25 grade but gradually the temperature in New York and in London starts to rise , starting in January until July it increases to 30 degrees , also in Sydney hours of sunshine dropped sharply in July to 15 degrees , however since August this scale has been decreasing in New York and and London. And in December in New York and London the temperature dropped again to 5 grade , and in Sydney it also begins to rise also the temperature rose 25 degrees. The highest number of hours of sunshine is observed in New York (2,535) and the lowest temperature is shown in London (1,180). Awarage amount hours of sunshine in Sydney (2,473)
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 61
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 73
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sunshine for year in three cities London , New York , Sydney. Overall the temp...
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...r year in three cities London , New York , Sydney. Overall the temperatures in...
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...e in London and New York is the enormous . In January, the temperature in New ...
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... in London and New York is the enormous . In January, the temperature in New Y...
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...ew York is the enormous . In January, the temperature in New York and London i...
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...k and London is very low about 5 degrees ,but at the same time in Sydney there is ...
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...in New York and in London starts to rise , starting in January until July it incre...
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...ry until July it increases to 30 degrees , also in Sydney hours of sunshine droppe...
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...ne dropped sharply in July to 15 degrees , however since August this scale has bee...
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...s scale has been decreasing in New York and and London. And in December in New York and...
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...the temperature dropped again to 5 grade , and in Sydney it also begins to rise al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55789473684 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47390982932 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436842105263 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.055212771 43.030603864 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168910132667 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125909113158 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10506584746 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161970006092 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133224040822 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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