Given are the line graph and table depicting the average monthly temperatures and the yearly hours of sunshine in London, New York, and Sydney.
It is perceptible that temperature changes in London and New York are related, with the hottest weather occurring in July and the lowest average temperature occurring in December. Besides, New York and Sydney have nearly identical total hours and are significantly longer than London.
In terms of monthly temperatures, London and New York vary significantly with a relatively similar pattern, despite the fact that the city in America has sunnier summers and colder winters. Monthly temperatures rise from around 5 degrees to a swell of 25 degrees and nearly 30 degrees in July. Temperatures in New York lower by about 5 degrees in December, which is half the information for London in the same month. In comparison, Sydney has the warmest weather in January, with a high of 25 degrees, and the coldest weather in July with a minimal of 15 degrees.
Regards to sunshine hours, New York and Sydney have figures nearly identical at 2,535 and 2,473 hours. In comparison, the average time spent on sunshine in London per year is lesser at 1,158 hours.
- More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly What are the reasons for this trend What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise 73
- It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people Agree or disagree 56
- The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009 The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants 56
- The table below gives information about UK independent films 78
- It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the line graph and table depicting the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.985 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73367426736 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0655913804 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184196525125 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920875537402 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873475353811 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145586565595 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845000632169 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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