The given graph depicts the temperature in London, New York and Sydney on a monthly average and the table portrays information about the annual number of hours of sunshine in those cities
Overall, London has the knee-high average in both annual sunshine and monthly temperature report as compared to other cities(New York and Sydney)
In precise, the temperature in New York starts at 4.5 in the month of January but surges to 10 in the month of March and continue to increase gradually in an energetic manner and reaches 30 in July. In the midway of July, the temperature begins to fall to 5 in Christmas month. Similarly, London rises from 9 in New Year month and follows to 24 in the seventh month but ultimately go down to 9.5 in December.
In contrast, Sydney arises from 25.5 at the beginning of a year and drops down to 16 in July. However, it again climbs up to 25 at the end of a year. Meanwhile, the table illustrates that New York has the largest number of sunshine of 2,535 as compared to London and Sydney (1,180 and 2,473 respectively).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ber of hours of sunshine in those cities Overall, London has the knee-high averag...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an energetic manner" with adverb for "energetic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...arch and continue to increase gradually in an energetic manner and reaches 30 in July. In the midway o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, similarly, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56084656085 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61567309727 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.908172124 43.030603864 381% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221080437566 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901854284291 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707180534642 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156826325698 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745718823806 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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