The graph and table below show average monthly temperatures and average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features.
The graph illustrates information about the monthly average temperatures in three cities, London, New York and Sydney and the table shows data about the number of hours of sunshine in these cities.
Overall, Sydney and New York received more sunshine compared to London. Sydney received more sunshine at the start and end of the year, whereas the other two cities received more sunshine in the mid year.
London and New York are cooler at the start of the year till march with an average temperature under 15 degrees. This was followed by a rise in the temperature till mid June, In July London and New York have their highest temperatures recorded with nearly 20 and 30 degrees respectively. Then temperatures start to decrease till December. January is the coldest month in both the cities.
On the other hand Sydney follows different trend, with start and end of the year have high temperatures reaching almost 25 degrees. However, Sydney has cooler June, July and August compared to other two cities. This is the where Sydney temperature comes below 20 degrees.Sydney and New York people have more sunny mornings with 2453 and 2535 average annual hours respectively. In contrast, London receives less than half of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sydney
...dney temperature comes below 20 degrees.Sydney and New York people have more sunny mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, whereas, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07352941176 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57719626722 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3207383211 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0909090909 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235651550179 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948676346684 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104197714251 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178665646649 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130635857382 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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